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Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with VqPK
Dear John, Hope you and your family doing well. It is really exciting to meet you after several years. I am writing this letter to express my sincere apologies that I will not able to join for movie. As you know, My organization is releasing a new product in the upcoming month and to accomplish this target. They have organized a brain storming session and I am the one who presenting the thoughts on it. However, I know, you were waiting for this movie since a long time. Consequently, I will not spoil your mood and one of friend will join you. His name is "Akash" and he was my schoolmate. During school days, Many times we went for movie and picnic's. I am sure, you will like his accompany. As he is very witty and caring in nature. Moreover, He visited several times in the mall where you booked the tickets for movie. So, He will be able to guide you and show you many other good place for food. I am looking forward to meet you soon. Best regards,
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really
exciting to
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you after several years. I am writing this letter to express my sincere apologies that I will not able to
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join
for
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movie
. As you know, My organization is releasing a new product in the upcoming month and to accomplish this target. They have organized a brain storming
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session and
I am the one who presenting the thoughts on it.
However
, I know, you were waiting for this
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movie
since a long time.
Consequently
, I will not spoil your mood and one of friend will
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join
you. His name is
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Akash
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and he was my schoolmate. During school days,
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Many
times we went for
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movie
and picnic's. I am sure, you will like his accompany. As he is
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very
witty and caring in nature.
Moreover
, He visited several times in the mall where you booked the tickets for
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movie
.
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So
, He will be able to guide you and
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show
you
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other
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place for food.

I am looking forward to
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meet
you
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. Best regards,
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IELTS letter Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

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