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Write a letter to your colleague asking for help in setting up an equipment for your presentation In your letter you should tell when and where the presentation will deliver describe your arrangements say him her what equipment you need

Write a letter to your colleague asking for help in setting up an equipment for your presentation In your letter you should tell when and where the presentation will deliver describe your arrangements say him her what equipment you need P2LJ
Dear John, I hope you had a great weekend. I am writing this letter to seek help for tomorrow's seminar on Marketing Strategies. I will be present a small discussion on digital marketing, and I would require some electronic devices to deliver my talk to all guests. The venue will be our office auditorium for tomorrow's meeting that will take place after lunch for one-hour. Since I have no experience in setting up the required devices for delivering my presentation, I would request you to please make the necessary arrangements such as mike, speakers, projector, and HDMI cable because you are kind of expert in preparing up those types of equipment. Moreover, I will be coming early to the venue for checking if every electronic device is working fine because I do not want any trouble in between my talk in front of the audience. Furthermore, it would be kind enough if you will update me after making all the arrangements in the auditorium. I look forward to receiving your response on it. Yours faithfully, Shwatank Bhasin
Dear John,

I hope you had a great weekend. I am writing this letter to seek
help
for tomorrow's seminar on Marketing Strategies.

I
will be present a
small
discussion on digital marketing, and I would require
some
electronic devices to deliver my talk to all guests.

The venue will be our office auditorium for tomorrow's meeting that will take place after lunch for one-hour.

Since I have no experience in setting up the required devices for delivering my presentation, I would request you to
please
make
the necessary arrangements such as mike, speakers, projector, and HDMI cable
because
you are kind of expert in preparing up those types of equipment.

Moreover
, I will be coming early to the venue for checking if every electronic device is working fine
because
I do not want any trouble in between my talk in front of the audience.
Furthermore
, it would be kind
enough
if you will update me after making all the arrangements in the auditorium.

I look forward to receiving your response on it.

Yours
faithfully
,

Shwatank
Bhasin
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your colleague asking for help in setting up an equipment for your presentation In your letter you should tell when and where the presentation will deliver describe your arrangements say him her what equipment you need

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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