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letter to the school for asking cookery class

letter to the school for asking cookery class 7PLlb

Dear Sir or Madam, This is in regard to the cookery course that I did from your school recently. I am really happy and excited to share my feedback on the same. To begin with, I want to tell you that the course was made super easy with an experience chefs and the the style of delivering the things made it all the more interesting, I had never done cooking before in my life and with your course help, it has certainly boosted my confidence. I learned baking cakes, making sweets and other delicacies. Since learning from your school, I have tried my hands on making cake, Italian pasta and paneer lababdar an Indian dish. To my surprise, my family members were spellbound and were literally licking their fingers after that. Therefore, I want to thank you for such a lovely session on cookery and would like to request your school to have another session of the same, where I am interested in learning new things like continental snacks. Looking forward for another great class of cookery soon. Yours faithfully, Rahul Sharma

Dear Sir or Madam,

This is in regard to the cookery course that I did from your school recently. I am really
 happy and excited to share my feedback on the same.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you that the course was made
 super easy with an experience chefs and Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.the
the the
 style of delivering the things made it all the more interesting, I had never The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "gone cooking".gone cooking
done cooking
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 in my life and with your course This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
, it has certainly
 boosted my confidence. I learned If 'learned' is used as a verb, it usually requires the infinitive: "to bake".to bake
baking
 cakes, making sweets and other delicacies.

Since learning from your school, I have tried my hands on making cake, Italian pasta and Possible spelling mistake found.panderpane erpanzer
paneer
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lababdar
 an Indian dish. To my surprise, my family members were spellbound and were literally
 licking their fingers after that.

Therefore
, I want to thank you for such a lovely session on cookery and would like to request your school to have another session of the same, where I am interested
 in learning new things like continental snacks. Looking forward for another great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 of cookery This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully
,

Rahul Sharma