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Letter organising a family party

Letter organising a family party 5AaKP

Dear Lily, I am writing this letter to personally invite you and your family members on my son's birthday. It will be held on 4th of July in 2021 at "Omad" cafe near the my residence. The party will be begin at 5p. m and dinner will start at 7p. m. At the event, for children we invite puppet-show, also playful dance, singing song will be performed by our relatives. So, our beloved grandparent will show their favourite dancing "Tango". I think our party will be greatful and colorful. Hope you can come to our party. Please confirm your presence on or before 2nd July by contacting me at 1234567. Hoping to meet with all of you at the party and bless the couples. Best friend, Lucy

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 invite you and your family members on my son's birthday. It will be held
 on 4th of July in 2021 at Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
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cafe
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the my residence
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party
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begin
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m
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start
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greatful
 and colorful. Hope you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 confirm your presence on or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 2nd July by contacting me at 1234567. Hoping to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 with all of you at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 and bless the couples. Best friend, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphLucy.Lucy!Lucy?Lucy:Lucy,Lucy;
Lucy