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One customer complain that her deliver was not delivered on time .You wrote apology letter to this customer.

One customer complain that her deliver was not delivered on time. You wrote apology letter to this customer. m23mK
Dear MadamI am writing to apologise for not delivered your ordered items from our shop on time. Our shop sorries deeply for this fault. I hope this discomfort is not caused your disappoinment. In the truth, we hired a new employee. Clearly, he has not enough experience and informations about our regular customers. All other deliver guys were with the tasks. I had to bail your deliver to him. This new courier could not find your address as he know city badly. I try to correct this mislead and deliver your booked shoppings as you prefer time. Due to glad you our shop gives you extra bonus which gives on your next purchase you will buy any item 40 percent cheaper in hopes compensating for the inconvenience. Once again sincerest apologise for discommodity I hope you will accept our forgiveness and remain our previous client. Yours faithfully, Jack Robinson.
Dear
MadamI
am
writing to
apologise
for not delivered your ordered items from our shop on time. Our shop
sorries
deeply
for this fault. I hope this discomfort is not caused your
disappoinment
. In the truth, we hired a new employee.
Clearly
, he has not
enough
experience and
informations
about our regular customers. All other deliver guys were with the tasks. I had to bail your
deliver
to him. This new courier could not find your address as he
know
city
badly
. I try to correct
this mislead
and deliver your booked
shoppings
as you prefer time. Due to glad you our shop gives you extra bonus which gives on your
next
purchase
you will
buy
any item 40 percent cheaper in hopes compensating for the inconvenience. Once again sincerest
apologise
for
discommodity
I hope you will accept our forgiveness and remain our previous client. Yours
faithfully
, Jack Robinson.
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IELTS letter One customer complain that her deliver was not delivered on time. You wrote apology letter to this customer.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
149 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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