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write a letter to your friend and tell her why you left your current job and where find new job

write a letter to your friend and tell her why you left your current job and where find new job rLNam
Dear Anmol, I hope you are doing well, actually I got a new job in a Tim Horton as a cashier by applying online just within a week and its very accessible for me as my last job's location was not suitable. Let me explain I started this job on last Monday. I applied many jobs but get proposal from Tim Horton and received a invitation just in a week. Its location is just 5 minutes by walk from my house and 2 minutes drive. As you know I am very extrovert person, so I want to meet new people. That is why I always try to get new job after some time. But there was an another reason to left the previous job as my co-worker did misbehave with me one day and supervisor also took her side. I felt very sad and thought I cannot work here any more where people do not respect your efforts. I think that is enough for me. How is your job running. I look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Raman
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, I hope you are doing well, actually I
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proposal from Tim Horton and received
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in a week. Its location is
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extrovert person,
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as my co-worker did misbehave with me one day and supervisor
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I cannot work here
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running. I look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes,
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Raman

IELTS letter write a letter to your friend and tell her why you left your current job and where find new job

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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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