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Write a letter to your friend and invite him for the exhibition of the museum , in your letter explain the following details -give details about the exhibition. -tell him why you will enjoy the exhibition. -plan for the available day to visit the exhibition.

Write a letter to your friend and invite him for the exhibition of the museum, in your letter explain the following details -give details about the exhibition. -tell him why you will enjoy the exhibition. -plan for the available day to visit the exhibition. VPQPJ
Dear Smith, Hope you are doing well, I’m writing this letter to invite you for a museum exhibition in Halmstad university and spend some time togather. Its been a long time since we met after our examination period, so I want to invite you for this exhibition. The exhibition is about arts and culture and has lots of information about how Halsmtad city was build and it is located to South Hall area near our meeting point. Moreover, you will really enjoy this exhibition because it has history on Halmstad city and information about arts and design, and culture and we will also hangout for some resturants and grabs some snacks as well. Furthermore, I am planing to go for the exhibition on the coming friday at 12o’clock in afternoon. I hope its not a problem for you. I hope we will enjoy this exhibition and spend some time and lots of fun, please confirm your availablity as well. Warm wishes, Mohtashim
Dear Smith,

Hope you are doing well, I’m writing this letter to invite you for a museum exhibition in
Halmstad
university and spend
some
time
togather
.

Its
been a long time since we met after our examination period,
so
I want to invite you for this exhibition. The exhibition is about arts and culture and has lots of information about how
Halsmtad
city was build and it
is located
to South Hall area near our meeting point.

Moreover
, you will
really
enjoy this exhibition
because
it has history on
Halmstad
city and information about arts and design, and
culture and
we will
also
hangout for
some
resturants
and grabs
some
snacks
as well
.

Furthermore
, I am planing to go for the exhibition on the coming
friday
at 12o’clock in afternoon. I hope
its
not a problem for you.

I hope we will enjoy this exhibition and spend
some
time and lots of fun,
please
confirm your
availablity
as well
.

Warm wishes,

Mohtashim
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend and invite him for the exhibition of the museum, in your letter explain the following details -give details about the exhibition. -tell him why you will enjoy the exhibition. -plan for the available day to visit the exhibition.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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