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Closure of sports center and leisure center

Closure of sports center and leisure center 6K6VG
Dear Sir/Madam, This letter is to bring to let you know the disappointment citizens are experiencing with the decision to shut doors of Shine Arcade sports center. I and my family are regular users of the Gold Gym situated on the top floor of Shine Arcade. My father, who is a diabetic patient, visits the gym on a daily basis to maintain his weight and my mother is a yoga practitioner there. Not only do we play table tennis frequently, but also eat often at the food court situated on the 2nd floor. In addition to the personal importance that the sports center has in our lives, the community will also lose a place to get together and have social gatherings. It will also result in loss of livelihood for those stall owners who set up their weekly stalls at the flea market organized at the central walking arena. Closure of the gym facilities would increase the laziness of the entire community. Hence, I request you to take into consideration the above-mentioned concerns and rethink the closure of our only sports center. Yours Sincerely, Sheetal Gaikwad
Dear Sir/Madam,

This letter is to bring to
let
you know the disappointment citizens are experiencing with the decision to shut doors of Shine Arcade sports center.

I and my family are regular users of the Gold Gym situated on the top floor of Shine Arcade. My father, who is a diabetic patient, visits the gym on a daily basis to maintain his weight and my mother is a yoga practitioner there. Not
only
do we play table tennis
frequently
,
but
also
eat
often
at the food court situated on the 2nd floor.

In addition
to the personal importance that the sports center has in our
lives
, the community will
also
lose a place to
get
together and have social gatherings. It will
also
result in loss of livelihood for those stall owners who set up their weekly stalls at the flea market organized at the central walking arena. Closure of the gym facilities would increase the laziness of the entire community.

Hence
, I request you to take into consideration the above-mentioned concerns and rethink the closure of our
only
sports center.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Sheetal
Gaikwad
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IELTS letter Closure of sports center and leisure center

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  American English
7 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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