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Write a letter of complaint to the company manager for receiving a damaged product. Write about date and what kind of product. Explain problems. Say what you would like them to do about it.

Write a letter of complaint to the company manager for receiving a damaged product. Write about date and what kind of product. Explain problems. Say what you would like them to do about it. PkWdg
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Ruxshona. I am writing this letter about receiving damaged product from your company. I am so embarrassed to write this. A week ago my old TV broke down so I wanted to buy a new one. I thought about under the what brand of TV to buy and a lot of people praised the HP brand and that is why I ordered from your company. I have ordered on 15th of November and it was delivered to me on 17th of November. When I opened the courier the product wasnin damaged position, the screen of tv was damaged. I was very disappointing because this is the first time has happened to me. Therefore, I am requesting you to send a person to take this damaged good back and deliver me some product in a good state or refund my money. Yours faithfully.
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is
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Ruxshona
. I am writing this letter about receiving
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damaged
product from your
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company
. I am
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so
embarrassed to write this. A week ago my
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old
TV broke down
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so
I wanted to
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buy
a new one. I
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thought
about under the what brand of TV to
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buy
and
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a lot of
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people
praised the HP brand and
that is
why I ordered from your
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company
. I have ordered on 15th of November and it
was delivered
to me on 17th of November. When I opened the courier the product
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wasnin
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damaged
position, the screen of
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tv
was
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damaged
. I was
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very
disappointing
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because
this is the
first
time has happened to me.
Therefore
, I am requesting you to
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send
a person to take this
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damaged
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
back and deliver me
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some
product in a
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good
state or refund my money. Yours
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter Write a letter of complaint to the company manager for receiving a damaged product. Write about date and what kind of product. Explain problems. Say what you would like them to do about it.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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