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Write a reply to Sara. In your email, you have to describe Manchester and the weather there, tell her about your part-time job, the family you are staying with, and your activities in the evening, and finally you have to write about your English classes there.

Write a reply to Sara. In your email, you have to describe Manchester and the weather there, tell her about your part-time job, the family you are staying with, and your activities in the evening, and finally you have to write about your English classes there. 705Rb
Dear Sara, How's it going? How have the family been? A number of thanks to your last letter. It was nice to hear from you again. I'm sorry I haven't written for you such a long time. I hope you and your family are well. As far as your know, I moved to Manschester for studying English three months ago. I thought you might be interested to know about Manschester and its weather. It's extremly beautiful here because of a number of historical buildings just like castles. The weather is a bit strange to me, it's foggy in the morning but very cold in the evening. I'm still doing my part-time works as a waiter in a fast-food restaurant because this work helps me speaking to a lot of people and making new friends. Consequently, I have chances to practice my English, My speaking skill improve a lot. In addtion, my hoster and hostess are so kind that sometimes I reckon they are my relatives. In the evening, I go to an English speaking club three times a week in order to practice English with my friends. Oh, I'm nearly forget to let you know about my class. It's wonderful, my teacher's kind and helpful. She always helps me with my homework and pronunciation consequently I feel more confident now. Anyway, I must go and get on with my work. Give my love to your parents. I look forward to seeing you again. See you soon. Best wishes,
Dear Sara, How's it going? How have the family been? A number of thanks to your last letter. It was nice to hear from you again. I'm sorry I haven't written for you such a long time. I hope you and your family are well. As far as your know, I
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Manschester
for studying English three months ago. I
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to know about
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Manschester
and its weather. It's
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extremly
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beautiful
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because
of a number of historical buildings
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just
like castles. The weather is a bit strange to me, it's foggy in the morning
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but
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very
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cold
in the evening. I'm
still
doing my part-time works as a waiter in a
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fast
-food restaurant
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because
this work
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helps
me
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speaking
to
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a lot of
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people
and making new friends.
Consequently
, I have chances to practice my English, My speaking
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skill
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improve
a lot. In
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addtion
, my
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hoster
and hostess are
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so
kind that
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sometimes
I reckon they are my relatives. In the evening, I go to an
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English speaking
club three times a week in order to practice English with my friends. Oh, I'm
nearly
Consider using a past participle here: "forgotten".
forget
to
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let
you know about my
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class
. It's wonderful, my teacher's kind and helpful. She always
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helps
me with my homework and pronunciation
consequently
I feel more confident
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now
. Anyway, I
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must
go and
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get
on with my work. Give my
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love
to your parents. I look forward to seeing you again.
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See
you
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soon
. Best wishes,
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IELTS letter Write a reply to Sara. In your email, you have to describe Manchester and the weather there, tell her about your part-time job, the family you are staying with, and your activities in the evening, and finally you have to write about your English classes there.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
248 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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