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Prospective graduate student interested in additive manufcturing

Prospective graduate student interested in additive manufcturing 705M2
My name is Zeynab Jaafari and I hold my Bachelor's degree in Manufacturing Engineering and Associate degree in Industrial design from Islamic Azad University, Khomeini Shahr. You can see my university ranking according to Scimago here. My GPA is 18. 16/20 (3. 87/4) and I was the top student in the major. I have explored your research group website. After glancing at a few of your recent papers and your research summary I find your work with jet and inkjet printing is very interesting. More specifically, I am impressed by your 2018 Flexible and Printed Electronics paper where you used AJP as a promising method for microscale digital additive manufacturing, and I have passed a course in this area which was broadened my horizons I would like to inquire whether you are currently accepting graduate students. I want to do my research under your supervision. If you find me a potential candidate, I will be grateful to discuss my capabilities over a Skype meeting and if you need more information or documents, I am happily at your disposal. Please find my CV, which has been attached. Thank you for your time and consideration, looking forward to your reply, Best Regards, Zeynab Jafari Zeynabb. jaafari@gmail. com
My name is
Zeynab
Jaafari
and I hold my Bachelor's degree in Manufacturing Engineering and Associate degree in Industrial design from Islamic
Azad
University, Khomeini
Shahr
. You can
see
my university ranking according to
Scimago
here. My GPA is 18. 16/20 (3. 87/4) and I was the top student in the major.

I have explored your research group website. After glancing at a few of your recent papers and your research summary I find your work with jet and
inkjet
printing is
very
interesting. More
specifically
, I
am impressed
by your 2018 Flexible and Printed Electronics paper where you
used
AJP as a promising method for
microscale
digital additive manufacturing, and I have passed a course in this area which
was broadened
my horizons

I would like to inquire whether you are
currently
accepting graduate students. I want to do my research under your supervision. If you find me a potential candidate, I will be grateful to discuss my capabilities over a Skype meeting and if you need more information or documents, I am
happily
at your disposal.

Please
find my CV, which has
been attached
.

Thank you for your time and consideration, looking forward to your reply,

Best Regards,

Zeynab
Jafari


Zeynabb
.
jaafari@gmail
.
com
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IELTS letter Prospective graduate student interested in additive manufcturing

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