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closure of local community center

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Dear Sir, In the recent community meeting it has been understood that local council is planning to close the local community center. With well-considered regards towards the members, this letter mentions the overall impact on the regular visitors as well as on community people residing in neighborhood area. In recent times, my family members are availing facility health fitness center to overcome on health issues. Apart from my family, school kids around the neighborhood area using swimming pool area to keep them fit. As well as senior citizens from the community meet each other in early morning and evening sessions for laughing club. Since this club is in central area everyone can reach with comfort and spend good time with their friends. Beginning of this year, community center officials’ decision towards closure of facility is completely awful and regretful. It is the place where most of the community center visitors shares great bond with this facility. As the matter of fact there is no any other such facility in near vicinity and it will be uncomfortable for older citizens to visit. My niece is training for swimming in this facility for upcoming interstate championship, closing this facility will be sorrowful decision and unwanted.

Dear Sir,

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 meeting it has been understood
 that local council is planning to close the local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodcenterdistrictpeoplecompanynation
community
 center. With well-considered regards towards the members, this letter mentions the overall
 impact on the regular visitors as well
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community
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community
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meet
 each other in early morning and evening sessions for laughing club. Since this club is in central area everyone can reach with comfort and spend This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
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 time with their friends.

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community
 center officials’ decision towards closure of facility is completely awful and regretful. It is the place where most of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodcenterdistrictpeoplecompanynation
community
 center visitors shares great bond with this facility. As the matter of fact there is Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?now
no
 any other such facility in near vicinity and it will be uncomfortable for older citizens to visit. My niece is training for swimming in this facility for upcoming interstate championship, closing this facility will be sorrowful decision and unwanted. 