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Dear Mr. Sam, My Family and I are relocating to a new country and requesting your expert advice and assistance to obtain rental property in the area. We are a family of 6, which includes my wife and me, and one 5-year-old daughter who is in preschool as well as my parents. As I mentioned, one another member of our family is our pet. It would be good, if you can support us finding a rental property which consists of 3 bedrooms, 1 kitchen along with one guest room for visitor. Additionally, a property with spacious garden can be extra useful as my parents are involved in gardening of herbs. We are thinking to shift next month as my daughter’s school will get start in spring. Also, we are considering the fact of old aged parents hence convenient area near to city center where hospitals and other domestic requirement like shopping facilities and pet care can be helpful at a time. Kindly, recommend and intimate us about the property at earliest and ask for if any documents and other details expected from my side for rental arrangement. Regards, Suchit.
Dear Mr. Sam,

My Family and I are relocating to a new country and requesting your expert advice and assistance to obtain rental
property
in the area.

We are a family of 6, which includes my wife and me, and one 5-year-
old
daughter who is in preschool
as well
as my parents. As I mentioned, one another member of our family is our pet.

It would be
good
, if you can support us finding a rental
property
which consists of 3 bedrooms, 1 kitchen along with one guest room for visitor.
Additionally
, a
property
with spacious garden can be extra useful as my parents
are involved
in gardening of herbs.

We are thinking to shift
next
month as my daughter’s school will
get
start
in spring.
Also
, we are considering the fact of
old
aged parents
hence
convenient area near to city center where hospitals and other domestic requirement like shopping facilities and pet care can be helpful at a time.

Kindly, recommend and intimate us about the
property
at earliest and
ask for
if any documents and other
details
expected
from my side for rental arrangement.

Regards,

Suchit
.
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