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Write a letter to your friend and express your feeling about a trip you had recently with him.

Write a letter to your friend and express your feeling about a trip you had recently with him. obNPB
Dear marich Hope you are doing good and enjoying your time with family writing this letter to pass my regards and want to say thanks for the sharing photo's of last month trip. Firstly i want to say the trip was so memorable and will managed me and family still feeling goosebumps when thinking of the same espectially want to thakes on aesome location photos you clickedk. Its always pleasure whenever our familiys plan this kind of adventerious trip places we visited rae so beatiful and greeen fields are just out of box inviation Secondly just want to sorry for wiritting your after so long aper my return my office works piled up want to concertate more on work to clear queues so ddn't get chance to write you about wonderful experience we share Lastly invite you to plan another such kind of trip near to our location as we also have so much narutre strips
Dear
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marich


Hope you are doing
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good
and enjoying your time with family writing this letter to pass my regards and
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want
to say thanks for the sharing photo's of last month trip.

Firstly
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i
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want
to say the trip was
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so
memorable and will managed me and family
still
feeling goosebumps when thinking of the same
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espectially
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want
to
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thakes
on
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aesome
location photos you
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clickedk
.
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Its
always pleasure whenever our
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familiys
plan this kind of
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adventerious
trip places we visited
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rae
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so
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beatiful
and
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greeen
fields are
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just
out of box
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inviation


Secondly
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just
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want
to sorry for
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wiritting
your after
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so
long
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aper
my return my office works piled up
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want
to
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concertate
more on work to
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clear
queues
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so
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ddn
't
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get
chance to write you about wonderful experience we
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share


Lastly
invite you to plan another such kind of trip near to our location as we
also
have
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so
much
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narutre
strips

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend and express your feeling about a trip you had recently with him.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
155 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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