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I just got your letter asking for advice. I should tell you that I had the exact same problem while I was working for the Rose insurance company.

I just got your letter asking for advice. I should tell you that I had the exact same problem while I was working for the Rose insurance company. oRldV

Dear Sarah I just got your letter asking for advice. I should tell you that I had the exact same problem while I was working for the Rose insurance company. I’m fully aware of your situation. Working with people who don’t cooperate with you, and don’t respect teamwork can be annoying. These types of people have a selfish streak and don’t let you improve, at all. While I was working for the insurance company, I had a coworker who didn’t consult with me at all. For example, we had to arrange a meeting for managers of different departments on Friday, but he changed its date without letting me know. Because of this, I had to apologize to my boss. I guess the best way to tackle this problem is to have a brief chat with your boss. You should inform him that there are people who aren’t willing to work with you, and it may cause many issues for the company. I do believe that he will do something for you. Keep in touch. Danial Mohajerani.

Dear Sarah

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just
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got
 your letter asking for advice. I should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you that I had the exact same problem while I was working for the Rose insurance This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’m fully
 aware of your situation. Working with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who don’t cooperate with you, and don’t respect teamwork can be annoying. These types of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 have a selfish streak and don’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
, at all.

While I was working for the insurance This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, I had a coworker who didn’t consult with me at all. For example
, we had to arrange a meeting for managers of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 departments on Friday, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 its date without letting me know. Because of this
, I had to apologize to my boss.

I guess the best way to tackle this problem is to have a brief chat with your boss. You should inform him that there are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who aren’t willing to work with you, and it may cause This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 issues for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. I do believe that he will do something for you.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
Keep
 in touch.

Danial Possible spelling mistake found.Maharani
Mohajerani
. 