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Write a letter to your friend about the live show which is happened in your hometown next week

Write a letter to your friend about the live show which is happened in your hometown next week YwOmr
I hope you will be best of your health I am writing this letter to inform you about a magic show which was conducted in the community hall of our society last saturday and I feel you will enjoy it. you will be excited to know that it was the same show which we both attended in our childhood after watching get I memorized all the activities which we enjoy together during our school time you would be you'd be surprised to know that next time in this show dash welcome I want that you should be here with me in the next show I also invited for all school meals in the show I request you that please come in this show which will be held on 5th November on Saturday on the same place in our community 30 hall in a society I will wait for you your friend
I hope you will be best of your health I am writing this letter to inform you about a magic
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show
which
was conducted
in the community hall of our society last
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saturday
and I feel you will enjoy it. you will
be excited
to know that it was the same
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show
which we both attended in our childhood after watching
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get
I memorized all the activities which we enjoy together during our school time you would be you'd
be surprised
to know that
next
time in this
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show
dash welcome I
Did you mean "want you to"?
want that you
should be here with me in the
next
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show
I
also
invited for all school meals in the
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show
I request you that
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please
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come
in this
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show
which will
be held
on 5th November on Saturday on the same place in our community 30
Possible agreement error. The noun 'hall' seems to be countable, so consider using: "halls".
hall
in a society I will wait for you your friend

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend about the live show which is happened in your hometown next week

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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