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he advertisement published in Times Now on 7th November 2021 edition, in which it was mentioned that you were looking for a person who can live you and take care of your kid.

he advertisement published in Times Now on 7th November 2021 edition, in which it was mentioned that you were looking for a person who can live you and take care of your kid. JwjDj
Dear sir or Madam, I’m writing this letter in reference to the advertisement published in Times Now on 7th November 2021 edition, in which it was mentioned that you were looking for a person who can live you and take care of your kid. I would like to apply for this position as I have been a nanny for last 10 years and have prior experience of taking not only taking care of kids on the contrary help them in their growth in and as a good human being. In carrier, I have learned and I believe that a home is a first school for a kid and whatever is taught at the initial stage of one’s life leads in defining ones character and personality. In my leisure time, I would love to learn more about the Australian culture so that consequently it would help me in understanding your traditions but also in teaching them to your kid. Looking forward for a positive response from your end. Yours faithfully
Dear sir or Madam,

I’m writing this letter in reference to the advertisement published in Times
Now
on 7th November 2021 edition, in which it
was mentioned
that you were looking for a person who can
live
you and take care of your kid.

I would like to apply for this position as I have been a nanny for last 10 years and have prior experience of taking not
only
taking care of kids
on the contrary
help
them in their growth in and as a
good
human being. In carrier, I have learned and I believe that a home is a
first
school for a kid and whatever
is taught
at the initial stage of one’s life leads in defining
ones
character and personality.

In my leisure time, I would
love
to learn more about the Australian culture
so
that
consequently
it would
help
me in understanding your traditions
but
also
in teaching them to your kid.

Looking forward for a
positive
response from your
end
.

Yours
faithfully
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IELTS letter he advertisement published in Times Now on 7th November 2021 edition, in which it was mentioned that you were looking for a person who can live you and take care of your kid.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
168 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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