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To write To suggest being a canteen at school

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Dear Sir, We are pupils of class 9. We are writing this letter to express our request. We want to be a canteen in our school. Because in our school has not a canteen. We have some facilities in our school. Such as libraries, small shops, computer rooms, sport halls, superate the English language rooms and other things. We are using them theese days. But in our school has not another thing. It is a canteen. Considering the school's financial position, we propose that you should open new canteen in our school. Pupils may be hungry while they are studying in lesson. So, pupils are satiety for they study incrediably well. Concerning this matter, our proposal is this school adminstration should open the modern, convenient and new canteen. In our opinion we would say in new canteen will have all convenience. In addition, we would like eat all kind of food we like that there. Our suggestion is that the food will be profitable for our health. Our suggestion is that. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully, All of Class 9.

Dear Sir,

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class
 9. We are writing this letter to express our request. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
We
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. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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some
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. Such as libraries, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
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But
 in our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
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 has not another thing. It is a canteen.

Considering the school's financial position, we propose that you should open new canteen in our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
. Pupils may be hungry while they are studying in lesson. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
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incrediably
 well. Concerning this matter, our proposal is this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
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adminstration
 should open the modern, convenient and new canteen.

In our opinion we would say in new canteen will have all convenience. In addition
, we would like eat all kind of food we like that there. Our suggestion is that the food will be profitable for our health. Our suggestion is that.

Thank you for your attention.

Yours faithfully
,

All of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
Class
 9. 