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Write a letter to the editor of a newspaper for correction of data in an article published about your hometown

Write a letter to the editor of a newspaper for correction of data in an article published about your hometown nXQLP
Dear Sir/Mam, This is regarding the article published in NewTimes magazine Page31 which beautifully describes Sun temple with incorrect location details. My hometown, Bhubaneswar is renowned as city of temples however, not for Sun temple. According to your article, Sun temple is located in Bhubaneswar, which is completely incorrect. It's located in Konark near Puri(Odisha). This misinformation hurts the sentiments of Oriya people who are deeply rooted in their rich cultural heritage. It also gives misinformation to readers worldwide, thereby, diminishing your magazine's credibility. Hence, I urge you to publish another article correcting the location of Konark temple to Puri from Bhubaneswar, and a small apology for misinformation. This will help restore the damage done on publishing incorrect information and it will also show your humility towards the readers. Waiting for your next article with correct information about Sun temple and a piece of apology! Yours sincerely, Prabalika Rath
Dear Sir/Mam,

This is regarding the
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article
published in
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NewTimes
magazine Page31 which
beautifully
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describes
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Sun
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temple
with incorrect location
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details
.

My hometown, Bhubaneswar
is renowned
as city of
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temples
however
, not for
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Sun
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temple
. According to your
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article
,
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Sun
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temple
is located
in Bhubaneswar, which is completely incorrect. It's located in
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Konark
near
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Puri
(Odisha). This misinformation hurts the sentiments of Oriya
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people
who are
deeply
rooted in their rich cultural heritage. It
also
gives misinformation to readers worldwide, thereby, diminishing your magazine's credibility.

Hence
, I urge you to publish another
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article
correcting the location of
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Konark
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temple
to
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Puri
from Bhubaneswar, and a
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small
apology for misinformation. This will
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help
restore the damage done on publishing incorrect information and it will
also
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show
your humility towards the readers.

Waiting for your
next
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article
with correct information about
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Sun
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temple
and a piece of apology!

Yours
sincerely
,

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Prabalika
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Rath
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the editor of a newspaper for correction of data in an article published about your hometown

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  American English
7 paragraphs
148 words
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