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Suppose your town have a website where you can make a comment if the people suffering any kind of problems. In recent times, the air pollution is increasing dramatically in your region. What is the actual reason for this abrupt change? What kind of health problems are created by this pollution? What should the government need to do to mitigate this perilous issue?

Suppose your town have a website where you can make a comment if the people suffering any kind of problems. In recent times, the air pollution is increasing dramatically in your region. What is the actual reason for this abrupt change? What kind of health problems are created by this pollution? What should the government need to do to mitigate this perilous issue? PEba2
Hello. Nowadays, it is noticeable that the atmosphere of our city is changing significantly. For this reason, we should discuss this environmental disaster. However, day by day the huge number of trees are being cut down and lots of skyscrapers are being built to make shopping malls as well as people's accommodation. The problem is that limitless sand and concrete are needed to build this kind of building, therefore, massive amounts of dust are created and finally it goes to the air by wind and causes people's health. One of the major concerns is that the dust-wind can be detrimental for breath as well as it can be hazardous for lungs. However, If administration wants to soothe this adventurous problem, they have to ensure that anyone will not be able to make unplanned huge buildings in this area. Beside this, the government must make adequate job facilities in the countryside because the majority of people who come to our city areas just find a perfect occupation. So, the ruler of the country needs to have a dream for diminishing this unpleasant disaster because it would not be as easy as that.
Hello. Nowadays, it is noticeable that the atmosphere of our city is changing
significantly
.
For this reason
, we should discuss this environmental disaster.
However
, day by day the huge number of trees are being
cut
down and lots of skyscrapers are
being built
to
make
shopping malls
as well
as
people
's accommodation. The problem is that limitless sand and concrete
are needed
to build this kind of building,
therefore
, massive amounts of dust
are created
and
finally
it goes to the air by wind and causes
people
's health. One of the major concerns is that the dust-wind can be detrimental for breath
as well
as it can be hazardous for lungs.
However
, If administration wants to soothe this adventurous problem, they
have to
ensure that anyone will not be able to
make
unplanned huge buildings in this area. Beside this, the
government
must
make
adequate job facilities in the countryside
because
the majority of
people
who
come
to our city areas
just
find a perfect occupation.
So
, the ruler of the country needs to have a dream for diminishing this unpleasant disaster
because
it would not be as easy as that.
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IELTS letter Suppose your town have a website where you can make a comment if the people suffering any kind of problems. In recent times, the air pollution is increasing dramatically in your region. What is the actual reason for this abrupt change? What kind of health problems are created by this pollution? What should the government need to do to mitigate this perilous issue?

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6.5
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