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he problem is the water is fooled in the street

he problem is the water is fooled in the street EdDEb
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to bring your attention for the problem that accord last week in almohafza street in Zagazig city. Until recently, I did not face any issue in this street. indeed, I am residing beside this street for more than ten years. I live in alnol building for many years, it is located in the corner between almohafza street and almanshia street. the problem is the water is fooled in the street and when the imergency crow is coming to solve this probem, there did not put the warrining fages in the street to ignore any accident in front of the issue place. although i told them to do this but thay told me that thay have to get order from local councillor to make it. After all of that, i bleleve that you will do what you can to solve this problem to ignore any futher problem next. tahnk you in advance for your prompt action. and look for your responce yourfathifully Moahmed Elshafey
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to bring your attention for the
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problem
that accord last week in
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almohafza
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street
in
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Zagazig
city. Until recently, I did not face any issue in this street.

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indeed
, I am residing beside this
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street
for more than ten years. I
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live
in
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alnol
building for
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many
years, it
is located
in the corner between
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almohafza
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street
and
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almanshia
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street
.
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the
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problem
is the water
is fooled
in the
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street
and when the
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imergency
crow is coming to solve this
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probem
, there did not put the
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warrining
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fages
in the
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street
to
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ignore
any accident in front of the issue place.
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although
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i
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told
them to do this
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but
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thay
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told
me that
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thay
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have to
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get
order from local councillor to
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make
it.

After all
of that, i
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bleleve
that you will do what you can to solve this
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problem
to
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ignore
any
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futher
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problem
next
.

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tahnk
you in advance for your prompt action.
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and
look for your
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responce


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yourfathifully


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Moahmed
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Elshafey
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IELTS letter he problem is the water is fooled in the street

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  American English
7 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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