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Letter of complaint you stayed at a holiday resort recommended by your travel agent

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Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about your travel agency. Firstly, when we arrived at the hotel, hotel administration informed us that I and my family didn't book. We were not registered by the hotel in spite of the fact that we have paid a month ago. To make matters worse, the weather was raining and the cold wind was blowing during a visit countryside. Nevertheless, your travel agent assured us that the weather is brilliant. My family and I will not be dining in your travel agency again, however, as travel agent, you would be wise to guard against such appalling treatment of your customers in future. Yours sincerely, Mr Brown.
Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
travel
agency.
Firstly
, when we arrived at the hotel, hotel administration informed us that I and my family didn't book. We were not registered by the hotel
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
in spite of
the fact that we have paid a month ago. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
matters worse, the weather was raining and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
wind was blowing during a visit countryside.
Nevertheless
, your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
travel
agent assured us that the weather is brilliant. My family and I will not be dining in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
travel
agency again,
however
, as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
travel
agent, you would be wise to guard against such appalling treatment of your customers
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
. Yours
sincerely
, Mr Brown.
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IELTS letter Letter of complaint you stayed at a holiday resort recommended by your travel agent

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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