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When you face difficult problems in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve them?

When you face difficult problems in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve them? OybBN
We all face a number of problems in life, and everyone has their unique way of solving them. In my opinion, we should always take advice from an experienced person for dealing with these obstacles. I feel this way because of two reasons which I will explore in the following paragraphs. First, most of our complications are not particularly special. Some other person may have experienced it in their life also. Therefore, they can assist us in making the right decisions. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in my first year, I was not able to complete my assignments on time. I was confused about whether I should ask for more time or copy the homework from my friend. So I asked my seniors about this issue. They told me that the teachers are very kind. If I ask sincerely, they will give me more time. In this way, I was able to get good grades despite my late submission. Secondly, half of our troubles are caused by overthinking. We should tell our complications to anyone who would listen, even if they will not solve it. By doing so, you will release your stress and escape overthinking. Moreover, when we express our feelings to someone, then we understand how stupid the problem was. For instance, a few weeks ago, I had a huge fight with my best friend. I was depressed due to the fact he did not invite me to his birthday party. He explained to me that it was the surprise party organized by his family. Despite that, I shouted at him and blocked him for a week. I realized how stupid I was when I talked to my mother. merely a conversation solved my problem. In conclusion, it is better to speak to someone rather than thinking about it too much. I suggest it because it is more convenient to ask someone who already went through the same dilemma. Furthermore, it helps in introspecting and balancing emotional stress.
We all face a number of problems in life, and everyone has their unique way of solving them. In my opinion, we should always take advice from an experienced person for dealing with these obstacles. I feel this way
because
of two reasons which I will explore in the following paragraphs.

First
, most of our complications are not
particularly
special.
Some
other person may have experienced it in their life
also
.
Therefore
, they can assist us in making the right decisions. My
own
experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in my
first
year, I was not able to complete my assignments on time. I
was confused
about whether I should
ask for
more time or copy the homework from my friend.
So
I asked my seniors about this issue. They
told
me that the teachers are
very
kind. If I ask
sincerely
, they will give me more time. In this way, I was able to
get
good
grades despite my late submission.

Secondly
, half of our troubles
are caused
by overthinking. We should
tell
our complications to anyone who would listen, even if they will not solve it. By doing
so
, you will release your
stress
and escape overthinking.
Moreover
, when we express our feelings to someone, then we understand how stupid the problem was.
For instance
, a few weeks ago, I had a huge fight with my best friend. I
was depressed
due to the fact he did not invite me to his birthday party. He
explained
to me that it was the surprise party organized by his family. Despite that, I shouted at him and blocked him for a week. I realized how stupid I was when I talked to my mother.
merely
a conversation solved my problem.

In conclusion
, it is better to speak to someone
rather
than thinking about it too much. I suggest it
because
it is more convenient to ask someone who already went through the same dilemma.
Furthermore
, it
helps
in introspecting and balancing emotional
stress
.
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IELTS letter When you face difficult problems in life, what do you feel is the best way to solve them?

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