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WRITE A LETTER TO A COMPANY TO COMPLAIN ABOUT THE POOR SERVICE YOU RECEIVED FROM ITS EMPLOYEE.

WRITE A LETTER TO A COMPANY TO COMPLAIN ABOUT THE POOR SERVICE YOU RECEIVED FROM ITS EMPLOYEE. Ky9e1
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to inform you that l experienced dissatisfaction from the service served by your employee. I went to your shop for the purpose of buying a latest microwave on last sunday. I was looking for any assistance but no one in that perticular section. After that, I went to inquiry desk and I found the employees are watching opera daily soaps. Then, I ask to help me in purchasing a microwave and the employees were pointing figure to each other for assistance. I did feel so bad and I was unhappy with their nasty behaviour. I will no longer your customer that is sure in the future. But, its my humble request you that if this kind of service will contiued in future then it may impact on your cost of company. Iastly, I would say that healthier customer service may only way too boost the wealth of company. Kindly have a look in this matter. Yours faithfullu, Jagruti pandya
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to inform you that l experienced dissatisfaction from the service served by your employee.

I went to your shop for the purpose of buying
a
latest microwave on last
sunday
.
I
was looking for any assistance
but
no one in that
perticular
section.

After that, I went to inquiry desk and I found the employees are watching opera daily soaps.

Then, I ask to
help
me in purchasing a microwave and the employees were pointing figure to each other for assistance. I did feel
so
bad and
I was unhappy with their nasty
behaviour
.

I will no longer your customer
that is
sure in the future.
But
,
its
my humble request you that if this kind of service will
contiued
in future then it may impact on your cost of
company
.

Iastly
, I would say that healthier customer service may
only
way
too boost
the wealth of
company
. Kindly have a look in this matter.

Yours
faithfullu
,

Jagruti
pandya
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IELTS letter WRITE A LETTER TO A COMPANY TO COMPLAIN ABOUT THE POOR SERVICE YOU RECEIVED FROM ITS EMPLOYEE.

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  American English
9 paragraphs
167 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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