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Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Recommend the best time of year to visit and why • Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose • Say what you would like to show your friend in your country

Dear sonal I was pleased to know that you are going to visit Lucknow. I am writing to confer you some information about the place to think before you come to visit. In Lucknow mostly people come to visit in winter season to enjoy the climate but in my opinion it’s better to come in mid-October because at that time climate is moderate. Weather in the month of December and January is very cold which will spoil your visit. Here there are ample of hotels to stay in with affordable charges. Moreover, Tulip hotel is one of the cheapest and demanding which is located in the coastal area of the suburbs. The Lucknow is known to be city of Nawabs which makes it a unique place to visit. There are some amazing sites to visit like Residency, Gol Darwaza and old market which is famous for chicken dresses and delectable cuisines. I will be your guide throughout your stay and would also drive you to theme park. Looking forward to meet you. Best wishes Jincy
Dear
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to know that you are going to
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visit
Lucknow. I am writing to confer you
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some
information about the place to
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think
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you
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come
to visit.

In Lucknow
mostly
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people
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to
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in winter season to enjoy the climate
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but
in my opinion it’s better to
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come
in mid-October
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because
at that time climate is moderate. Weather in the month of December and January is
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very
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cold
which will spoil your visit.

Here there are ample of hotels to stay in with affordable charges.
Moreover
, Tulip hotel is one of the cheapest and demanding which
is located
in the coastal area of the suburbs.

The Lucknow
is known
to be city of
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Nawabs
which
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makes
it a unique place to
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visit
. There are
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some
amazing sites to
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visit
like Residency,
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Gol
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Darwaza
and
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old
market which is
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famous
for chicken dresses and delectable cuisines. I will be your guide throughout your stay and would
also
drive you to theme park.

Looking forward to
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meet
you.

Best wishes

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Jincy

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Recommend the best time of year to visit and why • Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose • Say what you would like to show your friend in your country

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174 words
6.0
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