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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. • Explain what you like about the cafeteria • Say what is wrong with it • Suggest how it could be improved

Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with sitting capacity in the cafeteria in our college. I am so grateful that we have a service for well maintain and proper hygienic cafeteria from where I eat or drink during lunch time on daily basis. Food is really good though. I was dissatisfied to find out that most of the time I can not find a place to sit there. There are only few chairs which are most of the time have been occupied by seniors. Due to this reason, the canteen gets overcrowded. I would suggest that by either provide enormous chairs or lunch break will not be held for all sections at a time. Any of these actions will provide a relevant result. I would appreciate it if you could look into this matter at your earliest convenience. I look forward to hearing from you Kind regards, Karamjeet Kalra

Dear Mr. Smith,

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I look forward to hearing from you

Kind regards,

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