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One of your friends had a birthday celebration but you missed it.

Dear Friend Tom, I came to know that your birthday celebration was out of this world. I neglected to tell you that I couldn't make it. Anyway, I waited for the party a lot and I even got new clothes to wear on that day. But, in the end, I couldn't come. I can't tell you how bad I am feeling for not attending the celebration. I want to let you know that I am really sorry from the depths of my heart. On the day of your birthday, my aunt, who lives in a nearby town, got admitted to a hospital due to a major health issue. So I had to go to visit her with my parents. That was the reason why I couldn't show up at your birthday party. To make up for it, let us meet on this coming Sunday. We will go for a movie followed by a treat from my side. In the evening, we will spend some time together at my place playing video games and listening to the stories about your birthday celebration. Can't wait to see you on Sunday.
Dear Friend Tom,

I came to know that your birthday celebration was out of this world. I neglected to
tell
you that I couldn't
make
it.

Anyway, I waited for the party a lot and I even
got
new clothes to wear on that day.
But
, in the
end
, I couldn't
come
. I can't
tell
you how
bad
I am feeling for not attending the celebration. I want to
let
you know that I am
really
sorry from the depths of my heart.

On the day of your birthday, my aunt, who
lives
in a nearby town,
got
admitted to a hospital due to a major health issue.
So
I had to go to visit her with my parents. That was the reason why I couldn't
show
up at your birthday party.

To
make
up for it,
let
us
meet
on this coming Sunday. We will go for a movie followed by a treat from my side. In the evening, we will spend
some
time together at my place playing video games and listening to the stories about your birthday celebration.

Can't wait to
see
you on Sunday.
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IELTS letter One of your friends had a birthday celebration but you missed it.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
188 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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