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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice.

Dear Jehanzaib, I am writing to let you know that going on a camping is of great experience. While you are going to a hill station, you must take care of clothes and accessories which you take with yourself. I will say to you, it would be enjoyable. Let me explain! On the camping you will learn to live in tents, climbing mountains and boat riding as well. Although there are some disadvantages of the camping. You need to endurance up with mosquitoes. While boating is of great fun, but it also had an issue with its material which may cause into a great accident. So make sure you will take a right boat for yourself. I love to go with you this summer. It would be a great journey. I had just started my new job in our old high school so I cannot come due to my hectic work schedule. Do you remember Mr. Brown? He is my supervisor. I will get holidays in winter, if you want to go then, let me know. You want to explore different places. Your friend. Joel.

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different
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Joel. 