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Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: • give some details about the job • mention how you came across the job opportunity • explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

Dear Noah, I hope you’re in radiant health and best spirits. I received your letter last week and I’m happy to know that you’ve completed your evening course in culinary skills. I was delighted to know how you discovered your new hobby in cooking and want to develop it into a career. I’ve some good news for you, recently I came across something that might interest you. We had a business meeting at a nearby resort – Neons. There I got to know about a vacancy for an Italian chef who can work just on weekends since they have a special Italian menu during that course of time. Instantly you popped in my mind I thought of informing you. They have scheduled a walk-in interview on 30th of this month for which even the freshers are welcomed. See to it if you’re interested. I suppose this is the right thing for you since you are interested for one and it is part-time so, unless you make up your mind for a sure career plan on to this, it can give you an opportunity to have your hands-on experience and the whereabouts of working as a chef. Also, not leaving your career as a Personnel officer which you can have on weekdays until you step on to a final decision level. I wish you all the luck if you’re going to the selection process. See you soon. Warm regards, Pri
Dear Noah,

I hope you’re in radiant health and best spirits. I received your letter last
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
week and
I’m happy to know that you’ve completed your evening course in culinary
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was delighted
to know how you discovered your new hobby in cooking and want to develop it into a career.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’ve
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
news for you, recently I came across something that might interest you. We had a business meeting at a nearby resort
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
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Neons
. There I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
to know about a vacancy for an Italian chef who can work
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
on weekends since they have a special Italian menu during that course of time.
Instantly
you popped in my mind I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
of informing you. They have scheduled a walk-in interview on 30th of this month for which even the freshers
are welcomed
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
to it if you’re interested.

I suppose this is the right thing for you since you are
The usual collocation for “interested” is “in”, not “for”. Did you mean “interested in”?
interested for
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
one and
it is part-time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, unless you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
up your mind for a sure career plan on to this, it can give you an opportunity to have your hands-on experience and the whereabouts of working as a chef.
Also
, not leaving your career as a Personnel officer which you can have on weekdays until you step on to a final decision level.

I wish you all the luck if you’re going to the selection process.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Warm regards,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Pri
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: • give some details about the job • mention how you came across the job opportunity • explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
238 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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