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You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell: • explain how you knew about the plans • describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighbourhood • suggest a possible solution to the problem.

Dear Sir or Madam, I, Noah K. , am a resident of Dwarika and I am writing this letter to notify a probable problem which may take place as a consequence of the new development by the government resulting into multiple problems. I have a friend in the government aviation department through whom I came across the sure plans of an airport being constructed in the south-west of the city near Dwarika. Although such a decision will prove fruitful for the residents but it may raise some issues in the locality. The place selected for the airport construction results into manifold problems. One being traffic congestion, having an airport will add on to the traffics not just during rush hours but it would then be round the clock. Other problem is the disturbance to the residents nearby since the neighbourhood not only includes a residency area but also a school and an old-age home and the people associated will suffer the highest since it will bring a lot of chaos. Instead of having it in the aforementioned place, I think the best place is on to the other side of the city as the area there is not utilised much and the airport will make a good use of it. Though the land rates are a little hiked there but considering the above problems I suppose it is the most convenient option. I look forward to taking my appeal to a senior level so such a huge problem can be solved even before it arises. Expecting a prompt action. Thank you, Yours faithfully, Noah K.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I, Noah K.
,
am a resident of
Dwarika and
I am writing this letter to notify a probable
problem
which may take
place
as a consequence of the new development by the
government
resulting into multiple problems.

I have a friend in the
government
aviation department through whom I came across the sure plans of an
airport
being constructed
in the south-west of the city near
Dwarika
. Although such a decision will prove fruitful for the residents
but
it may raise
some
issues in the locality.

The
place
selected for the
airport
construction results into manifold
problems
. One being traffic congestion, having an
airport
will
add
on to the traffics not
just
during rush hours
but
it would then be round the clock. Other
problem
is the disturbance to the residents nearby since the
neighbourhood
not
only
includes a residency area
but
also
a school and an
old
-age home and the
people
associated will suffer the highest since it will bring
a lot of
chaos.

Instead
of having it in the aforementioned
place
, I
think
the best
place
is on to the other side of the city as the area there is not
utilised
much and the
airport
will
make
a
good
use
of it. Though the land rates are a
little
hiked there
but
considering the above
problems
I suppose it is the most convenient option.

I look forward to taking my appeal to a senior level
so
such a huge
problem
can
be solved
even
before
it arises. Expecting a prompt action.

Thank you,

Yours
faithfully
,

Noah K.
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IELTS letter You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell: • explain how you knew about the plans • describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighbourhood • suggest a possible solution to the problem.

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
265 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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