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Write a letter to your foreign friend inviting her to your birthday party

Write a letter to your foreign friend inviting her to your birthday party gDD03

it's been so long since we were last in touch but I haven't forgotten all the wonderful times we have spent together. It's my birthday coming up and I would love to invite you over for the celebration. The birthday celebration is a mini party with a maximum of twenty persons which is taking place at the balcony in my house with loads of food, games and sovernirs. You attending the party would mean so much as I miss all our old times and we can use this opportunity to catch up

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
's been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 long since we were last in touch This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I haven't forgotten all the wonderful times we have spent together. It's my birthday coming up and I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to invite you over for the celebration.

The birthday celebration is a mini party with a maximum of twenty persons which is taking place at the balcony in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 with loads of food, games and Possible spelling mistake found.governorssouvenirs
sovernirs
.

Did you mean "You're attending", "You are attending", or "You were attending"?You're attendingYou are attendingYou were attending
You attending
 the party would mean This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much as I miss all our This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).times, and
times and
 we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 this opportunity to catch up