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acceptance email to a recruiter

acceptance email to a recruiter Q8803

Dear Jason, I thank you for the opportunity and your kind offer, and I look forward to applying my skills to the position. I look forward to hearing from your team. If you require any additional information from me before then, please let me know. You can reach me by phone at +989151069714 or by email at Baghishani. r@gmail. com. Thank you again for giving me the opportunity to demonstrate my value to your team. Sincerely, Reihaneh Baghishani

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Thank you again for giving me the opportunity to demonstrate my value to your team.

Sincerely
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Baghishani

IELTS letter acceptance email to a recruiter

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

77 words

This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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