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Write a letter to your English speaking friend who is visiting you soon and asking you what presents your family would like.

Write a letter to your English speaking friend who is visiting you soon and asking you what presents your family would like. EdQgD
Dear Vaibhav, We are extremely happy that you are coming to India for visiting us. We have done all the preparation to welcome you. I am writing this letter in reply to your letter in which you are asking about my family and their liking. My parents and 2 siblings are very excited to meet you as I have shared my experience of Canada when I was with you and how you helped me at those times. There are lots of destinations in India to visit. So, if possible, please send me your schedule so I can arrange the best places to visit. I am sure I will make your visit memorable throughout your life. You are very generous to ask me about my family’s liking to present them a gift. But I will suggest you not buy any gift for them as all the items are easily available here in India. Your presence will be the best gift for us. Me and my family are eagerly waiting to receive you in India. Regards, Yours lovingly, Krunal.
Dear
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Vaibhav
,

We are
extremely
happy that you are coming to India for visiting us. We have done all the preparation to welcome you. I am writing this letter in reply to your letter in which you are asking about my family and their liking.

My parents and 2 siblings are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
excited to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you as I have shared my experience of Canada when I was with you and how you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me at those times. There are lots of destinations in India to visit.
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So
, if possible,
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please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me your schedule
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I can arrange the best places to visit. I am sure I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
your visit memorable throughout your life.

You are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
generous to ask me about my family’s liking to present them a gift.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I will suggest you not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
any gift for them as all the items are
easily
available here in India. Your presence will be the best gift for us.
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Me
and my family are
eagerly
waiting to receive you in India.

Regards,

Yours
lovingly
,

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Krunal
.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your English speaking friend who is visiting you soon and asking you what presents your family would like.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
177 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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