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write a letter to your cousin telling him about the bicycle.

write a letter to your cousin telling him about the bicycle. p1RmD
How are you? I heard that you want to buy a second-hand bicycle. I found an advertisement for a bike for sale. Here is some information about it. It was nine months old in use. The bicycle is still in good condition. You can get new sports rims that are trending in Malaysia now. If you want to go on an adventure with your friends at night, it also has a special bright light until 2 metres away. The reason he wants to sell it is that he wants to move house. The price is only RM199. It is reasonable and affordable. If you are interested, you can call Azlan at 012-1234567. He is a social butterfly. Apprise me what you think about it. Bye.
How are you? I heard that you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to
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buy
a second-hand bicycle. I found an advertisement for a bike for sale. Here is
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some
information about it.

It was nine months
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old
in
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use
. The bicycle is
still
in
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good
condition. You can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
new sports rims that are trending in Malaysia
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now
. If you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to go on an adventure with your friends at night, it
also
has a special bright light until 2
Possible spelling mistake. 'metres' is British English.
metres
away.

The reason he
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wants
to sell it is that he
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wants
to
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move
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. The price is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
RM199. It is reasonable and affordable. If you
are interested
, you can call
Possible spelling mistake found.
Azlan
at 012-1234567. He is a social butterfly. Apprise me what you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
about it. Bye.

IELTS letter write a letter to your cousin telling him about the bicycle.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
125 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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