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I went to the concert last night with my friends...

I went to the concert last night with my friends. . . MyMJo
dear jonly how are you? i will talk about holiday to me. i very happy because i go club with family last week. this is the firts time, i have experiment especialy so. i wish me will pass universiry in time no far. i really very interesting that it. at present, pedemic going diffical. so, i hope you fine and pass exam universiry. can you send ycrics ask of me to family of you. thanks. let be soon. You asked me about what clothes and equipment to bring. If I were you, I would pack very little – a swimsuit, some T-shirts, and shorts for the beach. My advice is to travel light, so you can fill your suitcase with souvenirs to remind you of Portugal! I hope that you’ll enjoy yourself in Lagos. If you want to know anything else, just drop me a line. Best wishes,
dear
jonly
how are you?
i
will talk about holiday to me. i
very
happy
because
i
go club with family
last week
.
this
is the
firts
time,
i
have experiment
especialy
so
.
i
wish me will pass
universiry
in time no far.
i
really
very
interesting that it. at present,
pedemic
going
diffical
.
so
,
i
hope you fine and pass exam
universiry
.
can
you
send
ycrics
ask of me to family of you.
thanks
.
let
be
soon
. You asked me about what clothes and equipment to bring. If I were you, I would pack
very
little
a swimsuit,
some
T-shirts, and shorts for the beach. My advice is to travel light,
so
you can fill your suitcase with souvenirs to remind you of Portugal!

I hope that you’ll enjoy yourself in Lagos. If you want to know anything else,
just
drop me a line.

Best wishes,
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IELTS letter I went to the concert last night with my friends. . .

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  American English
3 paragraphs
148 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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