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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to apply for the job of HR specialist in your company advertised in the Times Now on 15th September. As from my resume, you can see that I am currently working as a Human Resource generalist with a multi-national company and I have 5 years of experience in this field. My core job responsibilities include ensuring a smooth hiring process for the new joiners who are joining the company and providing them assistance in terms of understanding the company’s policies and taking care of the induction training. I have a Bachelor’s degree in Human Resources Management from ICFAI University. I can understand from the advertisement that you are looking for the similar set of skills and experience and hence I would like to apply for this position. If you find my past experience suitable for this job, please contact me to schedule the interview. I am looking forward to discussing my credentials with you personally. I would look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sam Thomas
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to apply for the job of HR specialist in your
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company
advertised in the Times
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Now
on 15th September.

As from my resume, you can
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see
that I am
currently
working as a Human Resource generalist with a multi-national
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
and I have 5 years of experience in this field. My core job responsibilities include ensuring a smooth hiring process for the new joiners who are joining the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
and providing them assistance in terms of understanding the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company’s
policies and taking care of the induction training. I have a Bachelor’s degree in Human Resources Management from
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ICFAI
University.

I can understand from the advertisement that you are looking for the similar set of
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skills
and experience and
hence
I would like to apply for this position.

If you find my
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past experience
suitable for this job,
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please
contact me to schedule the interview. I am looking forward to discussing my credentials with you
personally
.

I would look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam Thomas
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IELTS letter apply for the job of HR specialist in your company advertised in the Times Now

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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