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Write a letter to your friend apologizing for not joing him in watching a movie. Tell him/her why you cannot join and how will you make up fot it.

Write a letter to your friend apologizing for not joing him in watching a movie. Tell him/her why you cannot join and how will you make up fot it. VYBg6
Dear Solomon, I hope you’re healthy and enjoying the rainy season here. I remember we’d decided on watching Brad Pit’s new hit next weekend but what a pity! I’ve to go back to Baku, Azerbaijan for the exhibition my office is planning for three days later. Though, I wasn’t tasked for this job but an ‘out-of-nowhere’ resignation of my partner made me responsible for the event’s supervision. So I‘m really sorry about the change in our plans. Woofer who’s also a good friend of mine just like you agreed to go together with you to the cinema. Try to remember if you can, we’ve met with him a few times before in a bar at PJ Street last month. Also, I remember you and him having a blasting conversation and kind of held similar views about the movie. This is why I suggested him to go with you. I promise this’ll never happen again and we can watch another movie together after I come back next month. I hope you’re not disappointed and will understand my situation. Bye for now, Smith
Dear Solomon,

I hope you’re healthy and enjoying the rainy season here. I remember we’d decided on watching Brad Pit’s new hit
next
weekend
but
what a pity!
I
’ve to go back to Baku, Azerbaijan for the exhibition my office is planning for three days later. Though, I wasn’t tasked for this job
but
an ‘out-of-nowhere’ resignation of my partner made me responsible for the
event
’s supervision.
So
I‘m
really
sorry about the
change
in our plans.

Woofer who’s
also
a
good
friend of mine
just
like you
agreed
to go together with you to the cinema. Try to remember if you can, we’ve met with him a few times
before
in a bar at PJ Street last month.
Also
, I remember you and him having a blasting conversation and kind of held similar views about the movie. This is why I suggested him to
go with
you.

I promise this’ll never happen
again and
we can
watch
another movie together after I
come
back
next
month. I hope you’re not disappointed and will understand my situation.

Bye for
now
,

Smith
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend apologizing for not joing him in watching a movie. Tell him/her why you cannot join and how will you make up fot it.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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