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Dear Sir, I am writing this email to apply as a waiter in a job post about part-time work during the summer in one of your restaurant in Las Vegas, Nevada. Last summer, I worked as a service crew in Happy Hotel where I am a recipient of a spotlight award for being the most preferred employee of the month. Since I am not that for familiar with the job and roles of a waiter, I would like to ask the job description I will take if in case I will be lucky to be hired. I am sure the task given to me as a service crew previously is almost similar to a waiter. Nevertheless, I will ensure to do my best at any given circumstances. For your information also, I have a physical condition where my vision is almost blind without my eyeglasses. With this I would like to enquire about the working condition with the restaurant and kitchen. I hope my disability will not hindrance my application as I needed this part-time job to support my studies this coming school. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely yours, Mark Lester Marte.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this email to apply as a waiter in a
job
post about part-time work during the summer in one of your restaurant in Las Vegas, Nevada. Last summer, I worked as a service crew in Happy Hotel where I am a recipient of a spotlight award for being the most preferred employee of the month.

Since I am not that for familiar with the
job
and roles of a waiter, I would like to ask the
job
description I will take if in case I will be lucky to
be hired
. I am sure the task
given
to me as a service crew previously is almost similar to a waiter.
Nevertheless
, I will ensure to do my best at any
given
circumstances.

For your information
also
, I have a physical condition where my vision is almost blind without my eyeglasses. With this I would like to
enquire
about the working condition with the restaurant and kitchen. I hope my disability will not hindrance my application as I needed this part-time
job
to support my studies this coming school.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely
yours,

Mark Lester
Marte
.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your council to complain about

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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