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Write a letter to your boss for a one month leave and explain the reason for leave. How will you keep up to date while you're away with some suggestions.

Write a letter to your boss for a one month leave and explain the reason for leave. How will you keep up to date while you're away with some suggestions. ra8G2
Dear Sir, I am Rohan working as a Software developer in your company. I am writing this letter to request you for a month leave. The reason behind it is the critical condition of my grandmother. As she is in her sixties and has certain medical issues. She had been diagnosed by blockage in one of her valves. We consulted with the cardiologist and he suggested for an immediate heart surgery. I need to be with her in these tough times and look after certain procedures regarding the same. I also assure you for all the pending tasks that needs to be completed in a couple of weeks and will try to resolve them at the earliest whenever I get free time. Moreover, A friend of mine who is a software expert will join you temporarily on my behalf so that could relieve some burden from work. Hoping for a positive response from your side regarding this matter. Thankyou in advance. Yours faithfully, Rohan
Dear Sir,

I am Rohan working as a Software developer in your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. I am writing this letter to request you for a month
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
. The reason behind it is the critical condition of my grandmother. As she is in her sixties and has certain medical issues. She had
been diagnosed
by blockage in one of her valves. We consulted with the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
cardiologist and
he suggested for an immediate heart surgery. I need to be with her in these tough times and look after certain procedures regarding the same. I
also
assure you for all the pending tasks that needs to
be completed
in a couple of weeks and will try to resolve them at the earliest whenever I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
free time.
Moreover
, A friend of mine who is a software expert will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
you
temporarily
on my behalf
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that could relieve
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some
burden from work. Hoping for a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response from your side regarding this matter.
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Thankyou
in advance.

Yours
faithfully
, Rohan
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your boss for a one month leave and explain the reason for leave. How will you keep up to date while you're away with some suggestions.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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