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write a letter to your bank manager about fraudulent activities in you account

write a letter to your bank manager about fraudulent activities in you account GWNxm

subject: appropriate action against fraudulent activities Dear sir/mam I am a customer of your bank for the last 10 years & I am writing this letter to bring to your notice about some fraudulent activities done from my account. Yesterday afternoon, I got couple of messages citing: 3500 and 10000 have been deducted from my bank account. I was shocked because I haven't done shopping on that day & also I haven't given my debit to any other person. After reading the messages, I promptly called your customer care number and blocked the further transaction in my account With this letter, I have attached my account no, transaction details, balance status. I request you to look into the matter & take swift action to recover the money lost. I will be looking forward to the same being credited to my account. Your promptness in this regard will be highly appreciated. Thanks for your service. Your Sincerely

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSubject
subject
: appropriate action against fraudulent activities

Dear sir/mam

I am a customer of your bank for the last 10 years & I am writing this letter to bring to your notice about This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fraudulent activities done from my account.

Yesterday afternoon, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
It seems that an article is missing.a couple of
couple of
 messages citing: 3500 and 10000 have been deducted
 from my bank account. I was shocked
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I haven't The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "gone shopping".gone shopping
done shopping
 on that day & also
 I haven't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 my debit to any other person. After reading the messages, I promptly
 called your customer care number and blocked the further
 transaction in my account

With this letter, I have attached my account no, transaction This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, balance status.

I request you to look into the matter & take swift action to recover the money lost. I will be looking forward to the same being credited
 to my account.

Your promptness in this regard will be highly
 appreciated.

Thanks for your service.

Your Sincerely

IELTS letter write a letter to your bank manager about fraudulent activities in you account

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

155 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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