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The article is about the life story of a common man who became a successful entrepreneur. I am very glad to know about his achievement in the business and he always have the vision.

The article is about the life story of a common man who became a successful entrepreneur. I am very glad to know about his achievement in the business and he always have the vision. n6xWK
Dear Sir, I would like to introduce myself, I am Sundar Raj from Chennai, Tamil Nadu. I am writing this letter to find my friend, Mr. Ravi Jadhav with whom I have lost my contact. I found an article about him published in your newspaper dated 01. 10. 2020. The article is about the life story of a common man who became a successful entrepreneur. I am very glad to know about his achievement in the business and he always have the vision. He inspired me with his various start up ideas, since our childhood. It is very unfortunate, we lost contact, after I moved to Mumbai with my parents for business purposes. Kindly Provide the contact details or residence address, which would help us to get reunited. Please mention my name as Chittu from Chennai for easy recognition.
Dear Sir,

I would like to introduce myself, I am
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Sundar
Raj from Chennai, Tamil Nadu. I am writing this letter to find my friend, Mr. Ravi
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Jadhav
with whom I have lost my contact.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
found an article about him published in your newspaper dated 01. 10. 2020.

The article is about the life story of a common
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man
who became a successful entrepreneur. I am
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very
glad to know about his achievement in the
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business and
he always
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "has", "had".
have
the vision. He inspired me with his various
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start
up
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ideas
, since our childhood. It is
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very
unfortunate, we lost contact, after I
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moved
to Mumbai with my parents for business purposes.

Kindly Provide the contact
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details
or residence address, which would
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help
us to
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get
reunited.
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Please
mention my name as
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Chittu
from Chennai for easy recognition.
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IELTS letter The article is about the life story of a common man who became a successful entrepreneur. I am very glad to know about his achievement in the business and he always have the vision.

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  American English
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139 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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