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Write an apology letter to your friend for not attending his birthday party

Write an apology letter to your friend for not attending his birthday party oR5JD

Dear Mark, Welcome to the 40's! Heard from our mutual friends that your b'day was out of this world. . Though I had plans to surprise you, my last minute official procedures related to my work interfered and couldn't attend your party. Sorry dude! ! Forgive me for not attending your party, Mark. I feel frustrated if I think of the fact that I couldn't attend your b'day party. I am at loss of words to express, how sorry I am! ! While I had great plans to surprise you, some of my pending official activities, haunted me just before I started to your party. Unfortunately, I had to attend to it as it might impact my career prospects significantly. Well, I did complete the activities, at the expense of missing my best friend's b'day celebration Dude, I seriously want to make this up to you. . Why don't we meet at TJ's, the coming weekend? Despite the fact that we have some alone time to discuss a lot, I am sure that I wouldn't be able to recreate the same day as your b'day. And, I have a special surprise for you. Yours truly, Gandhi

Dear Mark,

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.
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party
. Sorry dude! !

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party
, Mark. I feel frustrated if I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 of the fact that I couldn't attend your b'day You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. I am at loss of words to express, how sorry I am! !

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some
 of my pending official activities, haunted me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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before
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started
 to your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. Unfortunately, I had to attend to it as it might impact my career prospects significantly
. Well, I did complete the activities, at the expense of missing my best friend's b'day celebration

Dude, I seriously
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 this up to you. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
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meet
 at TJ's, the coming weekend? Despite the fact that we have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 alone time to discuss a lot, I am sure that I wouldn't be able to recreate the same day as your b'day. And, I have a special surprise for you.

Yours truly
,

Gandhi