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Write a letter o new our for the noise happened at your house flat.

Write a letter o new our for the noise happened at your house flat. GM3R2
Dear Mr Sahota, I am the new resident in your housing society. The purpose of my writing is to apologize from you for the inconvenience caused from my place last night as a result to a minor fight. Describing my situation, I really feel guilty for the unpleasant noises which had let your family suffered. Actually, I was giving housewarming party to my friends. Simultaneously, everything was going smooth that a small talk has emerged into a verbal fight with a loud shouting inadvertently. On that verge, I was feeling hopeless as both of my personal friends became the party pooper. Thus, this has happened over a silly topic. In between I tried my best to make it abandon but all my efforts had gone in vain. At last, one of our senior friend helped to tackle the problem. Lastly, I would feel sorry for this all again and refrain to not hold party again to cause further problematic events. I know I have put you in troublesome but this will be last of that night. I hope you will compassionate enough to understand my unpleasant situation. Yours faithfully, Sarab.
Dear Mr
Sahota
,

I am the new resident in your housing society. The purpose of my writing is to apologize from you for the inconvenience caused from my place last night
as a result
to a minor fight.

Describing my situation, I
really
feel
guilty for
the unpleasant noises which had
let
your family suffered. Actually, I was giving housewarming party to my friends.
Simultaneously
, everything was going smooth that a
small
talk has emerged into a verbal fight with a loud shouting
inadvertently
. On that verge, I was feeling hopeless as both of my personal friends became the party
pooper
.
Thus
, this has happened over a silly topic. In between I tried my best to
make
it abandon
but
all my efforts had gone in vain. At last, one of our senior friend
helped
to tackle the problem.

Lastly
, I would feel sorry for this all again and refrain to not hold party again to cause
further
problematic
events
. I know I have put you in troublesome
but
this will be last of that night.

I hope you will compassionate
enough
to understand my unpleasant situation.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sarab
.
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IELTS letter Write a letter o new our for the noise happened at your house flat.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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