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Your neighbour has animals and they cause noise. Write a letter - Describe the situation - Suggestion to solve the problem - Tell him what will you do if he will not solve the problem

Your neighbour has animals and they cause noise. Write a letter - Describe the situation - Suggestion to solve the problem - Tell him what will you do if he will not solve the problem yXLe3
Dear Jay, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. My name is Rushi and i'm one of your neighbour. I am writing to inform you about noise problem which is I am facing right now because of your animals. Let me explain my situation, I'm working in night shift. Due to this reason, I must have to sleep in day time and due to your animals loud noise, I am not able to sleep well. Only because of this I'm suffering from health problem. It will be really helpful, if you close your door during sun time. So your dogs will not make noise outside of your house and I can easily get enough sleep. Would you kindly, think about my problem please. If it will continue then I must have to complain in police station and it will be west of time for both of us. Thank you for your consideration. Yours truely, RUSHI
Dear Jay,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. My name is
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Rushi
and
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i'm
one of your
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neighbour
. I am writing to inform you about noise problem which
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is I am facing
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because
of your animals.

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me
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explain
my situation, I'm working in night shift. Due to this reason, I
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must
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have to
sleep in day time and due to your animals loud noise, I am not able to sleep well.
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Only
because of this
I'm suffering from health problem. It will be
really
helpful, if you close your door during sun time.
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your dogs will not
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make
noise
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outside of
your
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house
and I can
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get
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enough
sleep.

Would you kindly,
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think
about my problem
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please
. If it
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will continue
then I
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must
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have to
complain in police station and it will be west of time for both of us.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
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truely
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RUSHI

IELTS letter Your neighbour has animals and they cause noise. Write a letter - Describe the situation - Suggestion to solve the problem - Tell him what will you do if he will not solve the problem

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  American English
7 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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