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You are enrolled in a study abroad course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider, and there is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter: Introduce yourself and describe the problem Describe the accommodation you thought you were getting Ask the provider to solve the problem

You are enrolled in a study abroad course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider, and there is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter: Introduce yourself and describe the problem Describe the accommodation you thought you were getting Ask the provider to solve the problem 76MA
Dear Mr. Gazeley, I am writing to dram your immediate attention towards the issues regarding my accommodation. I am attending the graduation course the college. During admission i applied for single person room which should be near the college campus. my course involve a rigorous study time that's why applied for the same. Quite and personal place make me highly productive. Let me explain you my situation on arrival at my accommodation i was surprised it was absolutely different from my requirement, there was so much noise moreover its a short walk to college from there. I thought i am getting a well furnished single person room with all the amenities and most importantly it should be near the college campus so that i don't have to spend my time walking towards my classes and hostel in between my breaks. kindly shift my hostel to somewhere more appropriate location as per my needs. I have already payed all the expenses for the accommodation. I await a favorable response from you. thanking you for your consideration. yours sincerely siddharth bakshi
Dear Mr.
Gazeley
,

I am writing to dram your immediate attention towards the issues regarding my accommodation. I am attending the graduation course the college. During admission
i
applied for single person room which should be near the college campus.
my
course
involve
a rigorous study time that's why applied for the same. Quite and personal place
make
me
highly
productive.
Let
me
explain
you my situation on arrival at my accommodation
i
was surprised
it was
absolutely
different
from my requirement, there was
so
much noise
moreover
its
a short walk to college from there. I
thought
i
am getting a well furnished single person room with all the amenities and most
importantly
it should be near the college campus
so
that
i
don't
have to
spend my time walking towards my classes and hostel in between my breaks.
kindly
shift my hostel to somewhere more appropriate location as per my needs. I have already
payed
all the expenses for the accommodation. I await a favorable response from you.
thanking
you for your consideration.

yours
sincerely
siddharth
bakshi
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IELTS letter You are enrolled in a study abroad course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider, and there is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter: Introduce yourself and describe the problem Describe the accommodation you thought you were getting Ask the provider to solve the problem

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