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You are enrolled in a study abroad course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider, and there is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter: Introduce yourself and describe the problem Describe the accommodation you thought you were getting Ask the provider to solve the problem

You are enrolled in a study abroad course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider, and there is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter: Introduce yourself and describe the problem Describe the accommodation you thought you were getting Ask the provider to solve the problem 76MA

Dear Mr. Gazeley, I am writing to dram your immediate attention towards the issues regarding my accommodation. I am attending the graduation course the college. During admission i applied for single person room which should be near the college campus. my course involve a rigorous study time that's why applied for the same. Quite and personal place make me highly productive. Let me explain you my situation on arrival at my accommodation i was surprised it was absolutely different from my requirement, there was so much noise moreover its a short walk to college from there. I thought i am getting a well furnished single person room with all the amenities and most importantly it should be near the college campus so that i don't have to spend my time walking towards my classes and hostel in between my breaks. kindly shift my hostel to somewhere more appropriate location as per my needs. I have already payed all the expenses for the accommodation. I await a favorable response from you. thanking you for your consideration. yours sincerely siddharth bakshi

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I am writing to dram your immediate attention towards the issues regarding my accommodation. I am attending the graduation course the college. During admission Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 applied for single person room which should be near the college campus. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMy
my
 course Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "involves".involves
involve
 a rigorous study time that's why applied for the same. Quite and personal place This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 me highly
 productive. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 you my situation on arrival at my accommodation Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
was surprised
 it was absolutely
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different
 from my requirement, there was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much noise moreover
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?it'sit is
its
 a short walk to college from there. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am getting a well furnished single person room with all the amenities and most importantly
 it should be near the college campus This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 don't This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 spend my time walking towards my classes and hostel in between my breaks. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterKindly
kindly
 shift my hostel to somewhere more appropriate location as per my needs. I have already Only in a nautical context 'payed' is an acceptable past tense form of 'pay'. Please check!paid
payed
 all the expenses for the accommodation. I await a favorable response from you. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThanking
thanking
 you for your consideration.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYours
yours
sincerely
Possible spelling mistake found.SiddharthSiddhartha
siddharth
Possible spelling mistake found.LakshmibashBashobatshit
bakshi