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Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:

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Hi Sir or Madam, I just went thought the advertisement which was published in today's newspaper. And I want to apply for current opening. I have completed my graduation in Hotel management from Mumbai university in 2020 and currently working in Hotel Taj island as waiter. In my current job I am responsible for taking order, serving food, cleaning table, and maintaining all the restaurant bill. With my experience in Hotel industry I will be good candidate for this job as I am quick learner, I generally learn new thing quicky and will quickly adapted in your organization and will take good care of your customers. If you need, I can get my experience letter form my pervious organization and I am available for interview on Monday, 14th June 2020. If there's any additional information you need, please let me know. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Naved Shaikh organization
Hi Sir or Madam,

I
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the advertisement which
was published
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today
's newspaper.

And I want to apply for
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current
opening.

I have completed my graduation in Hotel management from Mumbai university in 2020 and
currently
working in Hotel
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Taj
island as waiter.

In my
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current
job I am responsible for taking order, serving food, cleaning table, and maintaining all the restaurant bill.

With my experience in Hotel industry I will be
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good
candidate for this job as I
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am quick
learner, I
generally
learn new thing
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quicky
and will
quickly
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adapted
in your organization and will take
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good
care of your customers.

If you need, I can
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get
my experience letter form my
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pervious
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organization and
I am available for interview on
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Monday, 14th June 2020
.

If there's any additional information you need,
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please
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let
me know.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Naved
Shaikh

organization

IELTS letter Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:

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  American English
12 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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