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Your manager gave you a project to complete. You are unable to complete it within the deadline provided. Write a letter to your manager requesting him for an extension.

Your manager gave you a project to complete. You are unable to complete it within the deadline provided. Write a letter to your manager requesting him for an extension. nR3P2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with reference to the project 'ABC' assigned to me last month I am sorry to say that I won't be able to complete the project before 1st August. I apologise for the delay and I request you to extend the date. As per the discussion in meeting you assigned the project to be completed before 1st August. But due to some curcumstance there is a delay in submission. There were five members working in this project. But few day ago, two of our team member met with an accident. Both are injured and on leave. So now we are left with only three members in our team. It is very difficult to do market survey as well as collect all resources for project, but still we managed to do that. Now we are at the finishing stage of our project, which will take one more week. I hope you understand our situation. I apologise once again for the delay and assure you to submit the project at the earliest with perfection. Yours faithfully, Meghal Patel
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with reference to the
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project
'ABC' assigned to me last month I am sorry to say that I won't be able to complete the
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project
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before
1st August. I
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apologise
for the delay and I request you to extend the date. As per the discussion in meeting you assigned the
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project
to
be completed
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before
1st August.
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But
due to
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some
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curcumstance
there is a delay in submission. There were five members working in this
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project
.
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But
few day ago, two of our team member met with an accident. Both
are injured
and on
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leave
.
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So
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now
we are
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left
with
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only
three members in our team. It is
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very
difficult to do market survey
as well
as collect all resources for
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project
,
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but
still
we managed to do that.
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Now
we are at the finishing stage of our
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project
, which will take one more week. I hope you understand our situation. I
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
once again for the delay and assure you to submit the
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project
at the earliest with perfection. Yours
faithfully
,
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Meghal
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Patel
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IELTS letter Your manager gave you a project to complete. You are unable to complete it within the deadline provided. Write a letter to your manager requesting him for an extension.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
181 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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