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Informal letter which was written to one's best friend

Informal letter which was written to one's best friend rLVyn

Hello my best friend Tom! You have stayed in Spain for a long time. I miss you by heart. So some pain to me. Due to, all possible from it. To Myself may be, will go to Spain the capital of Madrid, yet I with neither James nor John. I will go to without they. I am feeling you place at the moment. Because, I was boring now. We are friend Mason recommends to you great idea. It is survive travel to UAE. But a problem UAE most sunshine, hot. If you come to here We will been in with friends as soon as the best of world's city in Dubai. We have waited you yet. Otherwise, you are come quicky! Please. . . You friend Sancho with RESPECT.

Hello my best You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friend
 Tom!

You have stayed in Spain for a long time. I miss you by heart. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 pain to me. Due to, all possible from it. To Myself may be, will go to Spain the capital of Madrid, yet
 I with neither James nor John. I will go to without they. I am feeling you place at the moment. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
, I was boring This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. We are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friend
 Mason recommends to you great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
. It is Consider using a past participle here: "survived".survived
survive
 travel A determiner is probably missing here: "to the UAE".to the UAE
to UAE
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 a problem UAE most sunshine, hot. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to here We Did you mean "will be" or "has been"?will behas been
will been
 in with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friends
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as the best of world's city in Dubai. We have waited you yet
. Otherwise
, you are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
Possible spelling mistake found.quicklyquickquirkyquick y
quicky
! This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
Don't put a space before the full stop.
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You You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friend
 Sancho with RESPECT. 