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Informal letter which was written to one's best friend

Informal letter which was written to one's best friend rLVyn
Hello my best friend Tom! You have stayed in Spain for a long time. I miss you by heart. So some pain to me. Due to, all possible from it. To Myself may be, will go to Spain the capital of Madrid, yet I with neither James nor John. I will go to without they. I am feeling you place at the moment. Because, I was boring now. We are friend Mason recommends to you great idea. It is survive travel to UAE. But a problem UAE most sunshine, hot. If you come to here We will been in with friends as soon as the best of world's city in Dubai. We have waited you yet. Otherwise, you are come quicky! Please. . . You friend Sancho with RESPECT.
Hello my best
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friend
Tom!

You have stayed in Spain for a long time. I miss you by heart.
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pain to me. Due to, all possible from it. To Myself may be, will go to Spain the capital of Madrid,
yet
I with neither James nor John. I will go to without they. I am feeling you place at the moment.
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Because
, I was boring
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now
. We are
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friend
Mason recommends to you great
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idea
. It is
Consider using a past participle here: "survived".
survive
travel
A determiner is probably missing here: "to the UAE".
to UAE
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But
a problem UAE most sunshine, hot.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
you
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come
to here We
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will been
in with
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friends
as
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soon
as the best of world's city in Dubai. We have waited you
yet
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Otherwise
, you are
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come
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quicky
!
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Please
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You
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friend
Sancho with RESPECT.

IELTS letter Informal letter which was written to one's best friend

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
129 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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