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write an email to Simon Stone about a summer job

write an email to Simon Stone about a summer job x2nP9

Hello Mr. Stone, First of all thanks for your email. I am so excited about this program. Depends on my personality and strength, I think I am a good fit for the role of management, and both my skills and abilities would be a good match for it. I am good at managing people and find their potential inner abilities. I can keep being calm and make tough decisions when it needed. I am a good problem-solver too that can be useful. Years ago, of course, I had not had the essential skills and knowledge like how to communicate with people but I gain and improve related skills over time. We can talk about the job and dig a little deeper in the future. hope to see you, Arash Falizkar

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First of all
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so
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think
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good
 fit for the role of management, and both my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and abilities would be a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 match for it. I am You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 at managing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and find their potential inner abilities. I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 being calm and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 tough decisions when it needed. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 am a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 problem-solver Did you mean "to that"?to that
too that
 can be useful. Years ago, of course
, I had not had the essential This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and knowledge like how to communicate with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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but
 I gain and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 related This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 over time. We can talk about the job and dig a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 deeper in the future. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHope
hope
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you, Arash Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphFalizkar.Falizkar!Falizkar?Falizkar:Falizkar,Falizkar;
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