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If you are interested in applying for one of our summer jobs, fill in an application form with your details and which job you want to do, and send it to me Simon Stone, summerjob Co-ordinator. In your application, you should: • say which job you are interested in. • say what skills and abilities you have. • say what skills you didn't have in the past but you do have now. Write your email in about 60-80 words.

If you are interested in applying for one of our summer jobs, fill in an application form with your details and which job you want to do, and send it to me Simon Stone, summerjob Co-ordinator. In your application, you should: • say which job you are interested in. • say what skills and abilities you have. • say what skills you didn't have in the past but you do have now. Write your email in about 60-80 words. NmQnd
Hello Mr. Stone, First thanks for your email. I am consequently excited about this program. Depends on my personality and strength, I think I am a good fit for the role of management, and both my skills and abilities would be a good match for it. I am good at managing people and find their potential inner abilities. I can keep being calm and make tough decisions when needed. I am a good problem-solver that can be useful. Years ago, of course, I had not had the essential skills and knowledge like how to communicate with people but hopefully, I gain and improve related skills overtime. We can talk about the job and dig a little deeper in the future. Hope to see you, Arash Falizkar.
Hello Mr. Stone,
First
thanks for your email. I am
consequently
excited about this program. Depends on my personality and strength, I
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think
I am a
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good
fit for the role of management, and both my
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skills
and abilities would be a
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good
match for it. I am
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
at managing
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people
and find their potential inner abilities. I can
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keep
being calm and
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make
tough decisions when needed.
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I
am a
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good
problem-solver that can be useful. Years ago,
of course
, I had not had the essential
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skills
and knowledge like how to communicate with
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people
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but
hopefully
, I gain and
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improve
related
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skills
overtime. We can talk about the job and dig a
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little
deeper in the future. Hope to
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see
you, Arash
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Falizkar
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IELTS letter If you are interested in applying for one of our summer jobs, fill in an application form with your details and which job you want to do, and send it to me Simon Stone, summerjob Co-ordinator. In your application, you should: • say which job you are interested in. • say what skills and abilities you have. • say what skills you didn't have in the past but you do have now. Write your email in about 60-80 words.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
126 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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